Sunday, January 9, 2011

A short draft

G1:     Don’t put your fucking hands on me. (pause) I’ve been calm but DO NOT put your hands on me.

G2:    (desperate) I’m sorry, baby, I’m sorry. I don’t understand what’s going on and I just.....will you please stop packing and talk to me? Just talk to me, please. I love you, why are you doing this to me?

G1:    (shocked) To you? Wow (mumbling to self)

G2:     Stop packing! You’re being ridiculous (begins shoving her away from the suitcase)

G1:     What are you doing? Let me go!

(G1 begins shoving G2 away and begins loosing her cool. G2 begins shoving back)

G2:     (attitude changes and becomes manipulative) Look at you, you're acting crazy!

G1:     Oh my God! This is insane, YOU are insane. (throws down clothes that are in her hand and tries to walk away)

(G2 grabs G1 with force to stop her from walking away)

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